Our short film - Lock In - Michael McGroarty

Here is the upload of our film, Lock In. This is where we will post general audience feedback. My own initial criticisms of the film is that it's a little short with the run time, and that in some shots the lighting is just about acceptable. Also, the sound levels change a couple of times, which upsets the flow of the film slightly. The camera is sometimes shaky, but nothing that ruins the aesthetic of the film. The strengths of the films is that it's got some good framing, and a suitably wide array of shots, considering the limited space of the location. The continuity is solid; no glaring errors, and the match-on-action that we have created works well. There is a distinct lack of music, but I feel this complements the film, although others may feel differently. I will post the video on Facebook, and get some suitable feedback. This way our evaluation will have a lot more substance.

Posted by Michael McGroarty